Hello everyone and a warm welcome to PART 5) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge” Week #13.
Today I’m featuring a contribution from D. L. Finn.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here is the image prompt.
This Contribution by D.L Finn
I had a heck of a time choosing the poem to post here. I ended up with several poems but narrowed it down to two. One was full of images and a connection to the soul, but the other one reminded me of a favorite poem, “A Road Less Traveled” by Robert Frost. Here’s the one that narrowly won out.
TREASURE
I searched day and night
For this promised treasure.
Given no map or guidance
Only a family quest to fulfill.
Each morning started the same…
Through the pines, cedars, and dogwoods
I followed my path.
My eyes scanned the hushed forest.
And when the filtered sunbeams departed…
So did I.
I repeated this ritual daily, never changing my course
Until that one day…
A shimmer sparkled between two large sugar pines.
Encouraged, I veered off into the unknown.
I soon found this careless choice difficult…
Leaving me conflicted…
And scraped and bruised from this uncharted territory.
But the small light beckoned me forward…
Until the sunbeams dissipated…
I turned to go home.
That’s when I saw it… shiny, bright, and golden.
I knew it was the promised family treasure
Quickly I swooped up the old key, studying it.
It was exactly as described down to the three holes,
But it offered no answers, only more questions.
I carefully tucked it away in my pocket.
All I had to do was… find the lock.
Here’s where my next journey began.
I’ll continue until I find what I seek…
The lock that my treasured key opens…
And what exists beyond.
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Thanks so much for stopping by! I look forward to reading your comments.
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Thanks for doing this and having me here! This one inspired me so much I had to pick from many. xo
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I love it! It’s great to know the images are providing some great inspiration and interpretations. ❤
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A fabulous share from Denise. I love the slant she took with this, bringing together family, mystery and treasures of one kind or another 🙂
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Another fantastic response to the prompt, Soooz! Denise expresses such deep emotions in her poetry!
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She certainly does, Jan. Thanks for stopping by. ❤
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I love this poetic quest. Bravo, Denise 🙂
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Lovely, Denise. I accompanied you on this journey. 🙂 Thank you, Soooz, for this great prompt. ♥
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❤My pleasure, Gwen.
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What a great adventure! I loved this poem, Denise! 🙂
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I am late in responding! Denise, this was a wonderful poem. I liked the theme with its deep emotion.
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You are certainly on an adventure. I hope she finds the lock that the key opens.
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I love this poem, Denise. It speaks for many of our tireless quest in hope to find the key to the locked treasure.
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