Hello everyone and a warm welcome to PART 9) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge 2021. “ Week #32. Today I’m featuring a contribution from Roberta Eaton Cheadle
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here is the image prompt and Roberta’s Contribution.
This short extract is from Roberta’s new supernatural short story entitled “Hide-and-Seek.”
Hidden behind the heavy, velvet curtains covering the window on the upstairs landing, the listener gazed at the fabric with flat, empty eyes. Moments later, she gave a shudder and thought, she’ll come upstairs. She’ll go to the secret room in the attic; it’s a great hiding place.
The stairs creaked.
Behind her screen, the listener’s thick lips twisted into a pleased smile, as the graceful bride stepped onto the landing, looked around briefly, and slipped soundlessly in the direction of the smaller staircase leading to the attic.
Moving stealthily, despite her bulk, the listener followed Anne up the stairs, and disappeared into the deep shadows just inside the attic door.
Unaware of the listener’s scrutiny, Anne moved towards a large chest on the other side of the attic. Reaching out, she pushed on the paneling.
Click!
A piece of the wall slid back, exposing a doorway.
Anne stepped through into darkness.
Click!
The hole slid closed.
The listener approached the concealed door and stood outside it, her eyes blank. Thoughts, like dark moths, flew randomly around her mind. The casket, I’m sure she’ll hide in the casket.
Like a bright lamp, this idea attracted the moths until, a little at a time, a plan formed…
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Suspenseful! I can see the dark attic, Anna, and the listener. Love this, Roberta!
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Thank you, Linda. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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You guys are amazing!
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Super, Robbie.
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Thank you, John.
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I enjoyed this take on the prompt, Robbie. Well done 🙂
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Thank you, Harmony, I’m pleased to hear that.
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This sounds great, Robbie! Is it published yet? If so, can you provide me the link? 🙂
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Hi Yvette, thank you. This is not published yet, it is part of my latest short stories due to be published in May.
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I can’t wait to read it. 🙂
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Oh my goodness! How scary! Well done, Robbie
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Sorry, Karen, I am rather a fan of scary.
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Talk about a ‘teaser’ I can’t wait to read more! Well done, Robbie.
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Thank you, Mark, I am really pleased you liked this.
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Nice teaser for your upcoming novel. It makes you want to read more.
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Thank you, Michele, I appreciate your comment.
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Very suspenseful! Great teaser, Robbie!
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Thank you, Jan.
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Strong, effective writing, Robbie. I’m looking forward to reading more. 😊
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Great setting and piece Robbie. Can’t wait to hear what happens next.
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