Hello everyone and a warm welcome to Part 5) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge 2021. Week #43.
Today I’m featuring a contribution By D L Finn.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here is the image prompt and D.L.Finn’s contribution.
Denise says … “I went with a Haibun format this week to fit this image. It is a prose paragraph combined with a Haiku/Senryu.”
The red and orange sky covered everything in death. Three months ago, the world lost its beauty. We were celebrating my daughter’s fifth birthday the day a deadly Nano bioweapon escaped from a laboratory. Trees, crops, and fish died immediately. Food and water became scarce, and people turned on each other. Only a few of us survived, scattered throughout the world in our shelters. My family and I only had supplies to last us a few days when help arrived from another planet. These green people, who weren’t much different from us, gave us two options. Board one of the old pirate-type ships that would take us to live in our past or die here. What choice did we have? We got on the last departing boat, leaving our destruction behind. The sea breeze blew our ships forward, and then everything spun, making me dizzy until I passed out. When I opened my eyes, I was lying on the boat under a blue sky with a message tucked into my hand: Try again. Change the past to prevent that future.
Help or just a game
Destiny’s cruel repeat
Can the outcome change?
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D.L.Finn can be reached here …
Thanks so much for stopping by! I look forward to reading your comments.
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Thanks for having me here today, Soooz. What a great image. My husband immediately wanted a copy of it. Xo
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It caught my attention as soon as I saw it. So many possibilities with this one. I love your Haibun😊
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Good one, Denise.
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Thanks, John 🙂
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Great take on the picture, Denise! If only we could go back and fix the damage at the beginning. 🙂
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Wouldn’t that be wonderful if we could fix the past damage, yet, then would we learn those lessons we need?
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Fantastic take on the prompt, Denise! A great imaginative piece of writing!
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Thank you, Jan. I kept thinking about time travel looking at the ships and went in this direction:)
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I love your poem, Denise, and the story. Amazing writing. 💗
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Thank you, Gwen. This is a fun format to work with and I’m amazed to get a story into it. xo
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It’s reassuring that no matter how bad things get, change can happen. Love the underlying message here, Denise ❤
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Thanks, Jacquie. There is so much truth in change, it is reassuring to think about instead of worrying.
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