Hello everyone and a warm welcome to Parts 1) and 2) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge 2021. Week #39.
Today I’m featuring contributions from entry 1)By John Howell and Entry 2) My own contribution.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here is the image prompt.
This one-line contribution by John Howell.
“I’m wondering how long those four corn dogs and I will stay together on this thing.”
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Here is my own contribution.
FBI Task Force Situation Room.
Special Agent Daniel Franklin raised his hand and the room fell silent. “Listen up, people. You’ve seen the images of the six dead children, and I know that like me they’ll haunt your sleeping hours and weigh down your days until we nail this monster.” He stepped away from the board behind him. “The victims were all taken from fairgrounds in three separate locations over the past twelve weeks. All three crime scenes were accessed on the last Saturday of the month. That’s today. Understand this, this guy has no boundaries, there is not one-line he will not cross to achieve his objective. He is not afraid of dying. The six-year-old victims trusted him enough to walk away from their parents and go with him. So, be on the lookout for anyone a child may be instantly drawn to.”
He checked his watch, “The fairground opens again in two hours. We’ll move out now and set up on location. Take care out there, people.”
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Helensvale Fairground.
Special Agent Daniel Franklin stood quietly in the command post set up in an unmarked van behind the neon glisten of the Ferris Wheel. He removed the picture of his wife and six-year-old twins from his wallet and placed it in the pocket of his shirt, close to his heart, to remind himself of exactly why he was here. He pulled on his red baseball cap to go along with his faded jeans and joined Agent Michelle Garner outside. They added to the growing crowd at the corn dog stand.
Dan Franklin issued further instructions. “Situation report. Check in every fifteen minutes.”
“Copy that.” Came back from seven different locations.
***
Two Hours later.
The past two hours had resulted in four possible persons of interest being tailed carefully until it was clearly established that they were not who they were looking for.
Agent Garner touched her partner’s arm and whispered, “What’s with the guy carrying a puppy? He wouldn’t be able to go on any rides with it. He came in alone, and so far he hasn’t seemed interested in joining anyone else.”
“Good call. Keep close enough to monitor his movements but be aware of how he may respond if he makes you as an agent. Stay safe.”
The female agent smiled and stood, then removed her iPhone and began to wonder around snapping images.
Several youngsters stopped and pointed to the puppy with delight, their parents gave the stranger an apologetic grin and moved them on. He then stood quietly. He appeared to be waiting for something or someone.
Agent Franklin keyed in his partner, “Michelle, heads up. I have another possible. Guy walking around dressed in clown costume and makeup, he’s carrying a huge bunch of red balloons and getting a strong response from both the children and adults around him. There is no clown listed on the staff roster. I’m gonna tail him. Team do you copy?”
“Copy command. We wait on your orders.”
Michelle followed her subject as he made his through sideshow alley and walked on over to the roller-coaster.
The clown was headed toward the same location. Agents Franklin and Garner watched on as their two possible suspects stood close to one another just behind a table filled with youngsters deemed too small to ride the roller coaster. A group of very young children left in the care of what looked to be a ten-year-old boy, by parents who should’ve known better.
The agents watched on as the two men moved closer and talked to each other. They both moved across to the vulnerable children. The puppy gained their immediate attention. The clown handed each of them a balloon, then spoke. “Would you like to see the litter of puppies? Maybe we could get your folks to let you have one.” The children hesitated but only briefly, then stood and began to follow the perpetrators.
“Jesus! These two are working as a team! Move on this location, do it now.”
“I’m getting between them and the children.” Agent Franklin appeared to stagger drunkenly into them, he kept his head down and laughed out an apology, “Shouldn’t mix beer and roller coasters. Sorry.”
The puppy guy was distracted by the disturbance and didn’t see Agent Garner come up behind him. “FBI Down on your knees. Do it now!”
The clown drew a knife and made a grab for one of the children. Dan Franklin drew his weapon and fired one shot to the chest and the clown hit the ground.
***
The debriefing was over. Agent Franklin removed the image of his family from his pocket and gently kissed it, before replacing it in his wallet and heading home to be with them. He drew a shaken breath and wondered if the nightmares would still plague him tonight.
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Funny one-liner, John 😁
Soooz, yay for the good guys! Great and moving take on the prompt 🙂
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Thanks, Harmony! I figured it was high time my muse let the good guys have a win. 😁
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Thank you, Harmony
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Never fill up before fair rides, John. Lol! Soooz, I’m so happy this one had a happy ending. I felt the urgency to find the perpetrators. Great job! 🙂
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I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story, Yvette! Thank you.😊
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Thank you, Yvette.
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John delivered another great liner with his one-liner, LOL.
And, Soooz, your story really hooked me. I think this is another one you need to add to your list of short fics you could spin into a novel. I’d love to read it!
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John’s one-liner had me nodding my head in understanding. 😁 I’m so pleased you enjoyed my story, Mae. The word count really had me chaffing on this one, and I wanted to take it a whole lot further, I’ll add it to the growing list of shorts I’m compiling. I do love writing these.🤗
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Thank you, Mae.
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John, your one-liner had me howling. Well done! And, Soooz, you captured me within minutes. I was relieved by the conclusion, which was also brilliant. 💗
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John’s one-liner left me smiling in remembrance of over-indulging on food just before a ride. I’m so glad you enjoyed my short piece, Gwen. I enjoyed letting the good guys win for a change. ❤
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Thank you, Gwen. Was that Howelling?
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After I posted my note, I realized what I had written. Yes, I should have said, Howelling! 🤣
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😂
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Good one-liner, John, and something to ponder. 🙂 Soooz, I’m glad your story had a happy ending! I enjoyed both of these!
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Thank you, Jan
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Thanks, Jan. So glad you enjoyed the post! 😊
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Good one Soooz. I’m glad they got both guys. I’m also worried about the puppy. Did someone take care of it?
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The puppy is currently residing in Pet Rescue Plaza aka my sitting room. 😁
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Good deal. Couldn’t be in a better place. 😊
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Four corn dogs and a ride, yikes! Good one, John.
So glad they caught the kidnappers, Soooz. It gave me chills thinking two men working together one with a puppy and a clown. Kids would most likely trust them. I never did like clowns, with the exception of Bozo for some reason, at the cirus they terrified me.
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I’ve always had a bad feeling about clowns. Then I read Stephen King’s ‘IT’ and that didn’t help one bit. I’m glad you liked the story, it was high time I let the good guys have a win. 😁
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I think we’ve all been there, John, lol. Soooz, great police procedural. I’m so glad they caught the creeps!
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Thanks, Jacquie! Yup, Good guys =1 …. Creeps =0. 😁
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I like those odds 🙂
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Gosh, John’s one-liner is quite a contrast to your piece, Suzanne. A parents worst nightmare to have a child go missing.
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Thanks for stopping by, Robbie. John’s one-liner is such a great counterbalance for my dark little story. I can’t even begin to fathom the depth of despair that any parent would feel having that nightmare to deal with.
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Yes, a very frightening thought.
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I feel sorry for anyone below corn dog guy, John. 🙂 Intense story, Soooz, I’m glad they got the creeps, but I’m pretty sure Agent Franklin will be haunted by those images, for life.
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Glad you enjoyed my story, Mark. The characters in this little short will not let go, so I’ve added this one to the new anthology I’m working on. 😁
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I was hoping for more. 🙂
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A great story, Soooz. I am glad the bad guys didn’t win! Let’s keep this story going
John, corn dogs should not be eaten before a ride of any kind! I hope you kept them down.
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So glad you enjoyed this, Karen. These characters are demanding more from me and I’m having some fun fleshing it out. 😊
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John can definitely appreciate the little things that make life worth while 😉
Honestly, we don’t have corn dogs here, in South Africa, but I have an idea of what they are.
Your story kept me glues till the end. It was as if I was watching NCIS. I liked Agent Franklin because he was a father first. I hope he will make it unharmed to the end of your book. You should let him have a corn dog once 🙂
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I’m glad my story held your interest, Pat! I’m enjoying fleshing out Agent Franklin. Still have no idea where he may take me. I’ll just buckle in for the ride. 😁
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Oh, I’m sure you’re on safe hands 😉
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😁
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