Hello everyone and a warm welcome to Entry PART 3) for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge” Week #27
Today I’m featuring a contribution from entry 3) by Anita Dawes & Jaye Marie.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here is the image prompt and the contribution.
I would never dream
that my lady would abandon me here
Her tears hit my handlebars
with a pain remembered
Where is she?
Will anyone come, take me for their own?
Would I ever see her again?
I watched her walk away
as if she has forgotten something
Why not take me with her
So much faster than two legs
We have fresh bread, eggs in the basket
It would have been eggs on toast for lunch
Oh, how I hope she will be back soon
To ride me home…
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Well done, Anita. I would like to know why she left as well.
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Oh, no! This sounds like a broken heart story. Well done, Anita ❤
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I love your response to the prompt, Anita. Thoughtful and heartfelt, it brought me deep into the possibilities. 🙂
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I can feel its heartache. Great poem, Anita. 🙂
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An interesting take on the prompt, Anita. To tell it from the bicycle’s POV is refreshingly different!
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Beautiful, Anita, with an underlying tone of anxiety which is very appropriate right now.
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You left me wondering and worried about the woman. Great poem, Anita.
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Anita, this was a wonderful take on the photo. I hope the young lady is okay.
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