Hello everyone and a warm welcome to PART 6) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge” Week #21.
Today I’m featuring a contribution by Gwen Plano.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here’s the image prompt and the contribution by Gwen Plano.

FOREVER.
“I’m not visiting the house, Charlie. There’s something I want to show you in the back.”
“Did you used to live here, Grandma?”
“No. My friend, Johnny, did.”
“Who’s Johnny?”
“Someone I knew. He died in WWII.”
She let her head fall and with it the years.
“Grandma?”
“He was my sunshine. I called him that. No matter how bad I felt, he’d make me laugh.”
He darts her a glance and takes her hand.
She inhales deeply, “He was my first love.”
Now behind the house, Charlie pauses to look around.
“Grandma, there’s nothing here.”
“I’ll show you. Let’s walk to that big oak tree over there.”
“Okay, now what?”
“Do you see a heart engraved on it?”
Charlie walks around the tree and shakes his head. “Are you sure this is the tree?”
“I’m positive.”
Charlie stares at the trunk and runs his hands over the rough bark, then looks up and spots something. Stepping back, he reads, “JS + MT — is this what you were talking about?”
“Yes. I told you this was the tree. Now I want you to dig right here, below the heart.” She points with her cane.
Charlie grabs a thick stick and begins digging. After a few minutes he hits metal. He turns to Grandma.
“Pull it out, Charlie. It holds something I need to give to you.”
A few tugs and Charlie hands her a tin box.
“Can you open it for me please?”
He works on the lid until it pops open. Inside there’s a folded paper and a ring. The message reads, Yesterday, today, and tomorrow — through all eternity. Charlie looks back at Grandma. She appears lost in thought.
“The ring, Grandma, what about this ring?”
She looks up and smiles, “It was my engagement ring. We made our promises at this tree. Soon you will be making yours, and I want you to have my ring. It will bring you laughter, you’ll see what I mean. And when it does, you’ll think of me.”
Thank you so much for stopping by. I look forward to hearing your thoughts. I’ll be posting further entries as I receive them.
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Thank you, Soooz, for offering another great prompt and for posting my story today. ❤
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❤My pleasure, Gwen.
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A beautiful heartwarming contribution from Gwen!
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It certainly is a tender take on the prompt. Thanks for stopping by again, Jan ❤
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Excellent, Gwen.
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This is so sweet, Gwen and I love how the poem blends in so perfectly into the story.
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I saw this on Gwen’s blog and thought it was exceptional. What a beautiful tale, and the poem at the end is perfect.
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I agree wholeheartedly, Mae. This a moving and tender take on the prompt. Thanks so much for stopping by. ❤
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What a beautiful and tender-hearted story, Gwen. The part of the story about the ring…so sweet! The poem and the couple in the foreground were perfect.
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Aw, that was beautiful, Gwen! Such a sweet story! 🙂
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What a beautiful and heartwarming story, Gwen! It touched my spirit too. 🙂
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Just to let you know here since the comment was closed for your post today. Praying for your surgery tomorrow, Gwen.
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I love how you add your visual take on the prompt, Gwen. This is lovely ❤
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