Hello everyone and a warm welcome to PART 8) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge” Week #20.
Today I’m featuring the contribution from entry 8) by Jan Sikes.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here is the image prompt.
A Message from Jan.
This is my contribution. I want to give you a little background on this poem. When my late husband was dealing with such a difficult physical decline, during one of the many hospital stays, he developed pneumonia and I feared he might not live until morning. I held vigil throughout that long night and this poem came to me. I remember searching for pen and paper to get it down, and I remember the tears that fell as I scribbled it. I felt that I had to give him permission to let go and I did it through this poem. He lived for a few more weeks after this incident and did recover from the pneumonia.
I cannot tell you the reason this image invoked this memory, but it did, so I am sharing.
Surrender
There is no shame in surrender when it is time
Like General Lee, you’ve known when to lay low
and when to climb
I’ve watched you suffer for so many years
Your life seemed destined to one of pain and of tears
Yet you fought on – the valiant soldier in fierce battle
You sang your song, rode tall in the saddle
You’ve now come down to the last battle call
You’ll hang up your sword, tired and weary you’ll fall
But know that you’ve left many good marks behind
While you learned how to love and how to be kind
Taught lessons to all who shared your many paths
That will be remembered long after you have passed
There is no shame in surrender when it is time
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CONTACT JAN SIKES:
All books are available at http://www.jansikes.com
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Thank you for sharing my Fiction-In-A-Flash contribution, Soooz!
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Thank YOU for such a wonderful contribution. ❤
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Lovely, Jan.
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Such an amazing love. This always brings me to tears.
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Thank you, Denise. Me too.
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It’s much of a hero to surrender as to triumph. Great poem, Jan.
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I totally agree, Miriam! Thanks for leaving a comment.
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You’re welcome, Jan.
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Jan’s entry was so moving. It speaks of the love of soulmates.
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Thank you, Mae! Hugs!
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Such a beautiful poem to encapsulate time. Thanks for sharing it, Jan. 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette!
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