Hello everyone and a warm welcome to PART 6) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge” Week #15.
Today I’m featuring a contribution by Jacquie Biggar.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here’s the image prompt.
This Contribution by Jacquie Biggar
The Stories These Walls Could Tell.
The wallpaper hangs in jagged strips from the walls, faded jacquard prints of a more dignified time. Cobwebs drape from the dilapidated ceiling, and I try not to imagine how big the spider is that created them.
Tom and I won this house at auction, before…
The floors creak beneath my sneakers and are gray with dust and grime, but they look original to my weary eyes. The drive took hours and all I can think about is a warm bath and soft bed- neither of which I’ll find here. I’ll go back to the small town I’d passed through soon, but first I need to finish what I started.
“We did it,” I tell my husband, sure he can hear me wherever he is.
The baby moves beneath my breasts and I gently rub the spot, my throat tight when I feel a tiny heel. Tom wanted this child so much. That and the home he’d grown up in. It’s bittersweet to know we’ve succeeded.
“It’s everything you said it was,” I say, continuing my one-sided conversation. “The fireplace is huge. No wonder you thought Santa got stuck up the chimney.” I trail a finger along the mantle. “Baby’s stocking will look lost on here.”
The tears that are never very far away wet my cheeks. It’s been five months, but I miss him still.
I always will.
With renewed determination, I climb the surprisingly sturdy staircase and enter the first room on the right- Tom’s childhood bedroom. A warm sensation flows over me and my tears dry as peace descends. He’s here, I can feel him.
The room is empty, other than an old blue chest shoved under the stained window. My heart flutters wildly and I’m suddenly scared of what I’ll find.
“Go,” a ghostly voice intones, his breath warm on my ear.
I startle and stumble forward. “Always so bossy,” I grouch with a smile.
The lid is heavy. I have to work to get it up, and then I sneeze as a musty fog rises from the interior. “Geez, Tom, you could have warned me.”
He chuckles from over my shoulder. I can almost feel his arms around me and baby.
His baseball hat from seventh grade sits on top the pile of memorabilia. My fingers tremble as they trace the Saints emblem. Who would have thought he’d go on to have a successful career in the NBL?
Alongside the hat, lay an autographed baseball bat, and below that, the reason I’m here. A leatherbound journal. My husband’s thoughts and dreams in his messy script fill the pages, front to back.
The house will be baby and my future, but this journal? It’s my link to the past and is truly priceless.
The baby rolls, creating a wave across my stomach and my dearly departed husband laughs.
His family is home.
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Blog: Jacquie Biggar- USA Today Best-Selling Author
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A sad but hear-warming take on the prompt. Well done, Jacquie 😊
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Thank you!
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I was deeply touched by this story, Jacquie.
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I’m glad, Karen, thank you.
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What a moving short story, Jacquie. Great job!
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Thank you!
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So well done, Jacquie. Bittersweet.
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Thanks, John. These prompts are fun!
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Yes they are. Got some of the best authors doing these same ones. It is fun to see the different interpretations.
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Oh my, Jacquie. Your story is so tender and heartwarming. ♥ Beautiful response to the prompt!
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Thank you, Gwen 🙂
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Great story!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful and touching story, Jacquie!
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Appreciated, Joan. I love this photo!
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An excellent response to the prompt fro Jacquie! Such a sweet sentiment.
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Thanks, Jan. Lost, but not alone 🙂
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Such a touching and heart-warming take on the prompt from Jacquie. So well done, and I love seeing all the different stories that evolve from a single photo 🙂
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I agree 100%, Mae. The rich diversity of these posts is amazing. 😊
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It’s awesome! Soooz manages to find photos that work for any genre!
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I’m delighted that you should say that, Jacquie. That’s the challenge I set myself when I go searching for prompts. fingers crossed I keep on finding them. 😊
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I felt so much empathy for her but at same time knew her husband was there for her. Great story, Jacquie:)
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Thanks, Denise. I like to believe love transcends time ❤
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It’s such a sad but heartwarming story, Jacquie! She couldn’t change the fact that he was gone but was comforted that he was with her and the baby. Very well done! ❤
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I loved Jacqui’s story, so endearing and I like that her MC found happiness among the grief.
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You brought tears to my eyes, Jacquie! Wonderful story! 🙂
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