Hello everyone and a warm welcome to PART 8) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge” Week #14.
Today I’m featuring a contribution by Joan Hall.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here is the image prompt.
This Contribution from Joan Hall:
Dylan walked onto the darkened stage. As the lights came up and a machine began emitting fog, thousands of fans started to scream. He was in his element. He’d dreamed of this life since he was four years old when his parents gave him a karaoke machine for Christmas.
He took the microphone as the band began to play. This was the final stop on his Unwind Tour, so named for his latest album. All in all, it had been a success. Sold out crowds every night. Standing ovations. The album was his biggest one to date, having sold over a million copies. What more could a rock star wish for?
Peace. Quiet. Relaxation.
No time for that in his world.
But I’m tired. Tired of touring. Tired of the screaming fans. Tired of… this lifestyle.
Dylan finished the concert. Went backstage with his band members. A month off. No touring. No rehearsing. No sessions in the recording studio. Everyone talked of their vacation plans. The drummer had booked a trip to Tahiti. The lead guitarist planned a vacation in Europe with his family. The bass player, Dave, was catching the next flight to the Virgin Islands.
Nice but he had no interest in visiting any of those places.
“What about you, Dylan? Going anywhere special?” The keyboardist asked.
He shrugged. “Not sure.”
“Are you kidding?” Dave said. “He’ll hole up in the studio or at his house writing music. We’d better enjoy the next few weeks. It’ll be a while before we get any time off again.
Had he become so predictable? Dylan had heard of workaholics. People who slaved their lives away while climbing to the top of the corporate ladder. Never having time for anyone or anything else.
Was his life as bad? Dave’s words had touched a nerve. He had planned to spend his time off writing new songs.
You need to unwind. You’re on a fast track to burnout.
But where would he go? Exotic locations held no appeal for him. But there was one place…
There he would find peace and quiet. He could relax.
“Dylan? You never told us what you planned to do,” Dave said.
“Going to a place where I can unwind. I’m going home.”
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Thanks so much for taking the time to stop by! I’ll be sharing each contribution as I receive it. I look forward to seeing your comments.
Thanks for featuring my story, Soooz!
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A pleasure to share this evocative piece. Thank you, Joan.
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Excellent,Joan
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Thank you, John!
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A great story from, Joan. I like that Dylan realized what he needed to recharge and was eager to embrace going home. There is no better place!
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Thank you, Mae! I enjoyed writing this piece.
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I commented on Joan’s blog but will comment here and share as well. Joan nailed it with this story as far as the rigors of the road and the many things that are sacrificed. Well-done!
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Thanks, Jan. Glad I was able to capture that aspect of life on the road in so few words.
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Thanks again for stopping by, Jan.
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No place like home, excellent, Joan!
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Thanks, Miriam!
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You’re welcome, Joan!
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Great reminder we can peace and recoup at home. Great piece Joan.
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It’s my favorite place to unwind. I’m glad you liked the story.
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Great reminder of the important things in life. Love it, Joan 🙂
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Thanks so much, Harmony!
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Aw, great story, Joan! Many people think fame is all exciting and fabulous, but it’s exhausting and draining as well. I love that he chose home as his place to unwind. 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette. I agree. Fame and fortune aren’t all it’s cracked up to be.
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Saw this on Joan’s site. Loved it.
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Thanks, Michele!
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Beautiful, Joan, and so true. I mentioned the same on your site. Home is where we can truly relax–hopefully. ♥
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I’m a homebody at heart. Don’t mind going places but home is my comfort zone.
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Well done, Joan. Home is where the heart is.
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Thank you so much, Karen.
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