Hello everyone and a warm welcome to PART 9) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge” Week #13.
Today I’m featuring a contribution by Joan Hall.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here is the image prompt.
This Contribution by Joan Hall.
The forest has always been a special place for me. As a child, I came here often. It was a place where I felt safe. Secure. At home.
I loved the sound of the wind as it whispered among the tall pines. The smell of fall as leaves crunched beneath my feet. The freshness of a spring rain. Occasionally, I would come across a raccoon foraging about. Once I even saw a bobcat, but I didn’t fear him.
The forest, along with all its inhabitants, was my friend.
It had been a long time since I’d walked here, but today I needed to clear my mind. Brandon’s sudden reappearance has left me with more questions than answers. I thought I’d closed that chapter of my life for good.
To say I’ve been happy the past two years would be a misnomer. But I coped with my loss. Realized I would never be more to him than a friend. It wasn’t like Erica would have allowed even that to continue. She’d dug her claws into him good and hard and he willingly went along.
When he showed up at the bar last night, asking for my help, I should have turned him away. But I couldn’t. Said he needed a friend. So, I foolishly allowed him to come home with me.
This morning he had questions. I had no answers.
I had questions for him. His answers were ambiguous, but he said enough for me to know he was in danger. He also told me Erica was no longer a part of his life.
“I made a mistake, Cassie. I regret ever having allowed her to destroy our friendship,” he had said.
At least he wanted our friendship back. But nothing more. Never would anything else.
But there was no time to think about that. Despite what happened in the past, I still considered him a friend. And he needed me. He’d saved my life on more than one occasion. Now, it was my time to help him.
I’m not sure what to do. We both had contacts in Woodville, but at this point, neither of us knew who to trust.
I walked along the once familiar trail, kicking pine cones as a means of working out my frustration. Better than rocks, I suppose. Booting a good-sized stone with the amount of force I used would probably result in a broken toe.
I kicked a rather large cone, revealing something metallic on the forest floor. Bending down, I discovered an old key. I couldn’t help but wonder how long it had been there or who it once belonged to. A mystery for sure.
Shrugging, I picked it up, then put it in the pocket of my jacket before walking deeper into the woods, still contemplating Brandon’s situation.
You know the answer.
But I don’t.
Yes, you do.
A memory niggled within the deep recesses of my mind. I willed it to surface.
Think, Cassie, think.
Presently, I came to the edge of a pristine stream. The crystal-clear water splashed among the rocks as it journeyed from the nearby mountains to the valley below.
If my memory was that clear. Instead it was like a murky pond.
That’s it!
A lake. An unsolved crime. The mysterious witness who was never located.
It all ties in.
I found the key.
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Thanks so much for taking the time to stop by! I look forward to seeing your comments.
This was a great story that could we a full length novel. Nice one, Joan.
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Thanks, Michele. At the least a longer short-story. 🙂
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Super story, Joan.
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Thank you, John.
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Wow, Joan, to be continued… Fabulous story!
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I hope to continue it in the near future. Thanks, Miriam.
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I hope you will, Joan. It’s a good thing about the flash fiction. We can start something that provoke an intriguing thought and expand on it later.
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I definitely want to learn more about this story. Great character voice, Joan. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Yvette!
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I really enjoyed this entry by Joan. I can so see it being expanded into something longer.
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That’s the plan, Mae. Hope the muse continues to cooperate.
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Great story that made me feel like I was walking along in the forest too. I’m curious as to what happens next 🙂
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Thank, Denise. I plan to continue this story sometime in the not too distant future.
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Yay!
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Great take on the prompt, Joan. I love the ending. 🙂
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Thank you, Harmony! I changed it from my original ending, and I think this worked much better.
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Wonderful, poignant story, Joan. It needs a sequel for sure! ♥
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Thank you so much, Gwen.
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Wonderful story. When will it be made into a book!
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I agree wholeheartedly, Karen! Thanks for stopping by. 😊
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Karen, I hope to make it part of a short story collection that I hope to publish next year. Right now I’m working on a novel and a short story prequel.
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Enjoyed this! Lots to ponder at the end.
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Thank you, Judi!
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