Hello everyone and a warm welcome to PART 3) of the entries for my weekly: “Fiction in A Flash Challenge” Week #9.
Today I’m featuring contributions from entry 4) by Karen Ingalls.
Last week I set the following Challenge:
Hello everyone and welcome to my new “Fiction in A Flash Challenge!” Each week I’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words.
Here is the image prompt.
MATT’S TREEHOUSE
By
Karen Ingalls
Matt had all the money one person could ever want or need. He inherited his parent’s fortune and estate where he lived alone in the 5-bedroom, 6-bath home complete with a swimming pool, putting green, and tennis court on forty acres of woods.
He wore gold necklaces, a Rolex watch, and a gold bracelet. His hair was always perfectly cut, he wore the finest designer clothes, and drove the latest Porsche model. All the gold could not buy Matt happiness. He was too much like his father who treated Matt’s mother cruelly and lived by his version of the Golden Rule: he who has the gold rules.
One evening, Matt and his father were driving the windy road leading to the estate. They both were drunk and were going too fast. Matt lost control of the car, went down a 50-foot embankment, and crashed into a large pine tree. Matt was thrown from the car but his father was trapped and died in the burning car.
Matt was haunted by nightmares and blamed himself for the accident. His only way of coping was to lash out even more at others, especially women. His sadistic actions often left the women with bruises. He would charm them at first flashing his money and buying them expensive gifts. However, when he made sexual demands on them that they did not agree to, he lashed out with intense anger.
Deep in the pine forest of his estate, he had a treehouse built. It was charming and comfortable though not large or ostentatious. Many were the nights that women screamed from pain or ran down the swinging bridge to escape Matt’s anger.
One stormy night, one young woman ran screaming from the treehouse. Matt laughed at her as he watched her scramble through the forest half-naked. “Good riddance,” he yelled from the small balcony.
When he went back into the treehouse, he began to hear the sounds of many women and his father screaming, “help me.” He looked around the room, but no one was there. The screams grew louder.
Matt ran to the door but it was locked and there was no escaping the living nightmare. He covered his ears and ran into the bedroom, but the screams could not be stopped. The wind howled and the tree branches tore at the little cabin. Like giant hands, they pushed and pulled until the tree house crumbled and fell to the ground. Matt was trapped under the timbers and could not move. His cries for help went unheard. For days and nights, he laid there, suffering from physical pain and hearing the non-stop screams.
He died alone with only his gold necklace around his neck which now brought him no comfort or joy.
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Karen can be reached at …
Karen Ingalls Author Page Amazon
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What a sad and tragic story. Well done, Karen.
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Thank you, Miriam. I once knew a man who lived by Matt’s interpretation of the golden rule. He was not as bad as Matt, but it was hard to be around him.
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Karen, you’ve given us another original twist on a tree house. Matthew deserved all he got. Good for you!
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If only more of us lived by the Golden Rule and not Matt’s interpretation, what a wonderful world it would be. Miriam, thank you for leaving a comment.
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Such a tragic story. Sad that too many people live by the alternate golden rule.
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What a thought-provoking story! You’ve captured Karma and made it real for all of us. ♥
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A story of lessons learned the hard way! Great use of the prompt from Karen.
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I can’t say I feel sorry for Matt, but this was a story that looked at excess, self-centeredness and privilege. Good job by Karen!
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No, I don’t feel sorry for Matt either. I do feel sorry for the choices he made. He always had an opportunity to change but chose not to. Thank you for your comment.
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Great story, Karen! I loved how Matthew got was he gave at the end. Great job!
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Yvette.
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Great tale of Karma, Karen.
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Denise, I appreciate your comment.
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It’s a good story, well told, and I felt Matt got his due comeuppance, but there was something very unpleasant about it because I felt that Matt himself was a victim of his father’s treatment of his mother, and of his father’s dominance and drunkenness and love of money … hardly a role model for his son. It would have been wonderful if Matt could somehow have changed – at the last minute perhaps …
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Thanks for stopping by, Dora. I enjoyed Karen’s interpretation of Matt meeting Karma. His father was certainly no role model. however, as an adult, Matt had his own choices to make about moving forward.
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