Hello! Thanks for stopping by! This is a little #paranormal #Short Story I came up with. Just for the ‘hell’ of it.๐
Welcome to “Club 666”
By
S. Burke
I watch you as you dress hurriedly.ย Where did you go?ย What happened to the man who hated to leave me after the passion was spent?
Now I lay unsatisfied and aching with the longing for what was.ย I crave the heat.ย I need the devouring flames as our flesh merged into one.ย Where did you go?ย ย Life is shortening with every passing hour.ย I need more.ย Much more.
โJason?ย Jason โฆ look at me.โ
โWhat?โ
โItโs over with us.ย I know it and so do you.ย Letโs not drag this out till we hate each other.โ
โI โฆ Iโm sorry.โย I watch your shoulders slump.ย I hear the relief in your voice.ย I have already moved on in my soul.ย Goodbye is merely a technicality. It always is.
โMy key โฆ Iโd like it back.โ
โFuck, babe โฆ thatโs cold.โ
โCold appears to be the flavor of the day.ย Doesnโt it?ย Leave the key on the bureau by the door on your way out.โ
โMy things?โย Your concern has already switched to the practical.
โIโll pack what little there is and drop them at your sisterโs place.โ
โIt was good?ย Wasnโt it?โย Insecure now, seeking reassurance, you look at me perhaps for the first time in months; really look at me I mean.ย I see the hesitation in your eyes.ย I recognize the why in the way you mouth droops at the corners.
I will not pander to the ego.ย โIt was good.ย Not great.ย Goodbye, Jason.โ
โJesus โฆ I donโt know you at all do I?โ
โGoodbye, Jason.ย Donโt forget the key.โ
I watch you leave and drag my dissatisfaction into the shower, scrubbing the last remnants of you from my skin.ย Tonight I would search.ย My need for the passion supersedes all else.ย I have long recognized and accepted that. Jason was just another one to be added to a list of others whose names I could never recall.ย It didn’t matter at all.ย None of them did. It was all about the hunt.
I dress carefully, luxuriating in the feel of the silk as it brushes my skin.ย The dress is low cut, not too exposed, yet hinting at the hidden pleasures within.ย My hair is soft, worn long, and loose.ย A light spray of โMy-Sinโ and a deft hand with the mascara and I slip the spiked heels on my perfectly pedicured feet.ย I am ready.
Club 666 is busy.ย The warm depth of the burgundy interior and plush fixtures ensure the ambience spells lust loud and clear.
The dance floor is almost full.ย Entwined bodies copulating by proxy as they move against each other.
My gaze travels, lightly touching on the height and breadth of the males in the club.ย Partnered or not, that is not my concern.
Predators have no conscience.ย I see โฆ I want โฆ I take.ย Simple. Devastation of relationships already in decline happens oftenโฆI merely assist in the process at times.
The hair on the nape of my neck stands up.ย I feel the penetration of a heated glance and enjoy the warmth.ย I turn.ย Ah!ย Yes.ย There you stand.ย Tall and narrow hipped.ย I cannot see your eyes, but the stance is self-assured.ย The body language whispers to me.ย Yes, yes, I am the one.
I stand completely still, waiting.ย I never, ever, make the first move.
You tilt your head to one side in an unspoken question.ย I give no answer.ย You must approach.ย Make me want you.
Unusual.ย You make no move.ย You simply stand a few feet away.ย Staring … yet not blatantly so. Intrigued, I move to step closer.ย Then stop.ย No, this is not my way.ย I turn my back and wait.
I feel the heat of a body behind me and turn slowly, you stand inches away.ย I wait for the dialogue.ย There is none.ย You lift a long-fingered hand and trace the outline of my mouth.ย I quiver in anticipation.ย This is different, new, and fresh.ย Exciting.
Your hand moves slowly; very slowly, down my neck and continues its hot trail to the outline of my breasts.ย It lingers softly gently tracing contours and my nipples stiffen in response.ย Your other hand circles in under my fall of hair, gentle pressure moves my head forward and you flick you moist tongue against the edges of my mouth.
I grow wet.ย The moisture and sensation a welcome friend long since visited.ย I want you, badly.ย I feel the urgent pulse in my groin, the aching emptiness that needs filling to satisfy that ache.
You step back, away from me.ย I want to move back into those hands.ย The urge almost wins.ย I hold back.ย You must come to me.
Your hand snakes out so fast I miss the movement.ย You close those long strong fingers around my wrist and pull me willingly to the exit.
Iโm pushed against a wall and you pin me there, in the semi-darkness.ย My hands imprisoned behind me in the hard pressure of yours.ย You switch, and one hand trails the length of my body.ย Soft, assured, and achingly slow.
My breathing increases rapidly as you trace beneath my dress to the inner contours of my thighs.ย Closer and closer to the empty place.ย I am writhing, attempting to force those exploring fingers to go further.ย I am beyond reason, the pleasure is all there is.ย I want more, much more.ย You stand and spin me around, lifting my dress and pulling my underwear down.ย Iโm trapped.ย Hot, captured and aching.ย You plunge into me with no warning, I moan.ย โPleaseโฆplease โฆ harder.โย You comply with brutal hard thrusts.ย Then, without slowing, you withdraw.ย I hear a laugh rumble deep in your chest.
You speak for the first time, โYour turn.โ
I sink to my knees hungry to comply. Yet again, you do the unexpected.ย Withdrawing fast.ย Iโm still on my knees.ย I hear you laugh once more, a dominant satisfied sound.
I stand, unsure what to do.ย Confused, this is different.ย Deprived of the length of you I suck on my fingers, wanting to insert them inside myself to quell the ache.ย You take my hand and pull me further into the darkness of the alley.ย Again, you turn me away from you, forcing me to bend, holding me captive with one strong arm as you take me from behind.ย Thrusting harder and harder until I scream with the pleasure of my orgasm.ย I am shaking so hard I can barely stand.
Realization hits me, you have yet to climax. Your tongue enters my mouth sucking and plunging.ย I am mindless now.ย All there is is youโฆthe smell of my cum and your own sweet scent.
You growl biting into my neck as you climax, holding me hard down against you as you moan.ย Shaking with the mixed reaction of pleasure and release, I smile.ย This is what I had waited for for so long.ย I am joyous, delighted, happyโฆexpectant.
I laugh.ย Then stop, as I sense something else.ย The body is not all that is withdrawn.ย โThat was so primal.โย I attempt conversation.
โHmmโ
โYou were wonderful.โย I offer.
โYes.ย I know.โ
I laugh at the confidence, enjoying it and needing more.ย Why is he moving away?
โWe didnโt even exchange names.โ
โNo โฆ we didnโt.ย Did we?โ
โMy name is Rowena.โ
โI know.โ
โOh โฆ but how?ย Doesnโt matter though.ย โ
โThatโs right โฆ it doesnโt.โย Why does he sound so, so โฆ distant.ย Didnโt we just share the most amazing sex?ย I am still aching with the pleasure of it.ย I want and need more.ย I reach out a hand; he shrugs it off as if it were an annoying insect.ย My stomach knots, I feel vulnerable.ย I am not accustomed to this feeling.ย I do not like it.
โWell,โ I laugh nervously, โWhat do we do now, a drink perhaps?โ
โNo โฆ not for me.โ
He begins to walk away.ย What the fuck?
โHey!ย I donโt even know your nameโ
He turns and smiles at me.ย I return the smile, feeling relieved.
โI didnโt get your name,โย I repeat feeling foolish.
His eyes flash red in the darkness and the face alters as it strictures into a soulless smile, I cower at the evil coldness of the laughter. ย โMy name is Retribution,โ ย he said as he vanished in a spiraling, choking, hiss of mist.
#
Like I said … just for the hell of it.๐
Very entertaining late night read!
LikeLiked by 1 person
๐Thanks, Linda. I stepped outside my comfort zone with this one. I’m so pleased you enjoyed it.
LikeLike
I love the way you just toss โem off. Iโd work days over this. Great!!! Erotica in our future reads?
LikeLiked by 1 person
โค๏ธ๏ธ๐ My muse is on steroids at the moment, and I must admit I’m loving it. Just completed the 1st draft of my new thriller novel…whoo-hoo. It does have a side-order of romance but not erotica. This short story is my first attempt at using an erotic element. I have to admit I was very nervous about posting it, so I’m even more delighted that you enjoyed it.
LikeLike
I like that closing line:) Great Halloween tale. I hope this means you are are writing another short story collection?
LikeLiked by 1 person
๐Thanks, Denise! I’m so pleased you enjoyed it. I may work on another anthology in the New Year, but for now I have just completed the 1st draft of my latest thriller novel. I’m so excited about this one. I’ll be asking for beta readers very soon (She says with a pleading look and a hopeful heart) XO
LikeLiked by 2 people
I will beta read for you gladly )
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yay! Thanks so much. I appreciate it.๐น
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hot, hot, hot! I need a cold shower after this. Very entertaining, Suzanne. Like Denise wrote, ‘Great Halloween tale.’ I enjoyed it. The ending was so cool.
LikeLiked by 1 person
๐I really stepped outside my comfort zone with this one, Vashti. The heat factor pushed my boundaries. lol. I’m so pleased that you enjoyed it. xo
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s why it’s good to step outside the box every so often. ๐ xx
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m late! That was ghastly, good, and scorching hot. I am FREAKED by the number 666. You wouldn’t get me anywhere near a club with that name, LOL, but this made an excellent Halloween read.
LikeLiked by 1 person
๐Ditto, my friend. Frankly I don’t think I could avoid crossing the road to avoid even walking past a place with that number. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Superb!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Whew. I really enjoyed this one, Suzanne. It must have been fun to write.
LikeLiked by 1 person
lol … Thanks, John! I fogged up my glasses a couple of times…๐ My first attempt at writing those steamier scenes, I have to admit I was nervous about posting it. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
LikeLike
Retribution indeed. Steamy and a bit spooky, Soooz!
LikeLiked by 1 person
And then some.๐
LikeLiked by 1 person