Hello and welcome again to my poetry in progress “Glimpses Across The Barricades”
Today I’m sharing something very recent, my daughter, grandson and I all relocated from high octane Sydney: Australia, to a beautiful and small University Town to the west of our Blue Mountains.
I’m loving this serenity, warmth, and air of human goodness.
I hope my poem reflects that.
City Girl
By
Suzanne Burke.
The train beat out a rhythmic sound,
as I journeyed far from familiar ground.
City girl in a whirl
Was what I heard that rhythm say.
Unfamiliar visions caught me unawares
As I first looked with my city-eyes
Into that country sky.
Rolling greens waves of willows
As they followed country streams
I was now envisioning something beautiful
Not something from my dreams.
Nightfall came in blankets of glitter coated black
When I unwound my city self
To greet that country sky.
I drew in the scented country air to an inexperienced soul
And then I shook with hunger at its touch
Its virgin freshness composing music in my heart
I knew with growing thankfulness
This was the place to start
Again.
I walked the cobbled streets quickly
It was the city way
With eyes downcast and high alert
Ah, yes, that city way.
Suspicious of these country folks
And their warm greetings of G’day.
These past months have flown by
As I relocate that city self
The nights are dark and deeper
Than any I have known.
The sunrise is more welcome here
Its warmth a tremor in my soul
Anticipated happily in a most unfamiliar way.
Now I walk those cobbled street
With head held high and proud
I smile and greet new faces
With my very own, ‘G’day’.
The city girl is resting now,
Her nightmares tucked away.
I will enter this journey with all I am
For that’s the country way.
Lovely poem. Soooz!
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🌹Thanks, Gerry. Its lovely to see you stop by.😊
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Beautiful Ma ❤
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Reblogged this on Words To Captivate ~ by John Fioravanti and commented:
If you love good poetry, you’ll love Suzanne Burke’s personal reflection about relocating to a small country town. It is powerful and moving, so please, read on…
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Thanks so much for the kind words and the reblogg, John.❤️️
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A very moving look inside the poet’s soul – I loved it, Suzanne!
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🐨 Thank you, my friend.
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I really enjoyed your poem City Girl! Wonderful imagery!
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🐨 Thanks so much, I’m delighted that you enjoyed it.
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“Nightfall came in blankets of glitter coated black”—-love that!
Great poem with vivid images, Soooz. I’ve never been a city girl, so those country images speak loudly to me 🙂
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A really lovely poem. I agree with Mae about that amazing phrase.
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😊 Thank you so much, I’m delighted that you enjoyed it.🐨
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❤️️ Thanks, Mae Clair. I don’t think I’ll ever find words adequate enough to describe just how lovely my new home is. Blessed serenity.🐨
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Such a lovely piece, Soooz. Beautiful tranquility. XO
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(((HUGS))) Thank you, my friend.😊
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I like the play between country and city living. I’ve just found your blog by way of John’s reblog and am excited to read more soon 🙂
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Lovely to connect with you, Christy! Thanks so much for the kind words.😊
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I agree that it’s wonderful to connect! Have a nice weekend Soooz 🙂
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